Case Study

  • Website copy that works: Converting technical expertise into client connection for Dark Knight IT

    “I connect in a very black and white, almost manual textbook sort of way that was uninspiring.”

    That’s what Daryn Hesketh, CEO of Dark Knight IT, told me in our first call. His company excels at protecting businesses from cyber threats, but their website wasn’t capturing the personality and expertise that makes them exceptional partners for their non-technical clients.

    The TLDR

    Dark Knight IT needed to transform their deep cybersecurity expertise into website copy that built trust and connected with clients. Through strategic messaging and personality-driven copy, we created a website that balances authority with accessibility, helping them appeal to both SMEs and enterprise clients who need top-tier cyber protection.

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    The Client

    Dark Knight IT (yes, that is the best IT business name ever!) is a cybersecurity firm protecting businesses from all those scary things happening in the online world (like that terrifying podcast ad I heard the other day that said your Bluetooth coffee machine was spying on you – ugh!). They’re exceptional at keeping their clients safe, but like many technical experts, they struggled to translate their knowledge into language that would resonate with potential customers.

    The Challenge

    Ever tried reading a technical manual when you just want to know if a product is right for you? That’s what Dark Knight IT’s website felt like. Daryn was open that he’d used ChatGPT to write it – cue long complicated sentences, and yawn-inducing paragraphs that were hurting their conversion rate.

    They faced challenges that are common to many technical businesses:

    • Converting complex knowledge into accessible, engaging content (without dumbing things down)
    • Moving away from documentation-style writing that failed to inspire confidence
    • Building trust in a field where technical authority must balance with approachability
    • Creating consistent messaging that works for both small businesses and enterprises
    • Developing a voice that maintains expertise while showing a little of the team’s awesome personality

    The Solution

    Deep-Dive Discovery

    I started by diving deep into what makes Dark Knight IT different. Beyond the technical specifications and service features, what really matters to their clients? What keeps business owners up at night when it comes to cybersecurity?

    This research revealed something crucial: while clients absolutely want technical expertise, they also need to trust the humans behind the technology. They want to know they’re working with experts who understand their business, not just their tech stack. And they want to be talked to like humans, not robots.

    Voice Development

    This is a scary industry, often based on instilling even more fear in customers so they’ll buy your services. The Dark Knight team aren’t about fear, they genuinely care about their clients and want them to feel safe. So, instead of the typical cybersecurity approach, we developed a voice that balances authority with accessibility. Think of it as having a conversation with a highly knowledgeable friend who knows how to explain complex concepts without making you feel out of your depth. And who cares about you.

    This meant:

    • Translating technical features into real-world benefits
    • Using storytelling to explain complex concepts
    • Letting Dark Knight’s personality shine through with a little tongue-in-cheek humour!

    Website Copy Strategy

    The website copy we created guides visitors through a clear narrative, explaining technical concepts through their real-world impact. Each page builds trust while maintaining expertise, showing potential clients they’re in capable hands without overwhelming them with technical details.

    The Impact

    The new messaging framework and website copy transformed how Dark Knight IT connects with potential clients. Now they have a website that:

    • Genuinely connects with visitors
    • Builds trust through clear, accessible expertise
    • Creates consistent messaging across all channels
    • Appeals effectively to both SME and enterprise markets

    Daryn has also been using sections of the copy when he networks and pitches to potential clients.

    The Client’s Verdict

    “Honestly, my perspective has totally changed. I wouldn’t start a new website or marketing strategy without consulting Peta first. She solved our articulation problems by creating text that was emotional and gave personality to me and the team.”

    – Daryn Hesketh, CEO of Dark Knight IT

    So What?

    In the cybersecurity world, everyone’s selling expertise. But expertise alone isn’t enough – you need to show the humans behind the tech, the personality behind the protection. And you need to be able to explain important concepts to those who aren’t tech natives – without being patronising.

    That’s what strategic messaging and website copy do for you:

    • Translate your technical knowledge into language that resonates with clients
    • Show what makes your approach unique in a crowded market
    • Create emotional connections while maintaining authority
    • Build trust through personality and expertise

    Are you in a technical field? Do you struggle to transform your expertise or complex product into content that connects with actual humans? Let’s talk about how strategic messaging can help.

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  • Building customer trust from day one – an eCommerce success story

    mother kissing her cute baby
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    The TLDR

    Jevon Baby, a startup launching a medical-grade, wearable breast pump, needed to stand out in a competitive market where trust is everything. Through strategic brand messaging and empathy-driven website copy, they launched with a clear voice that resonates with their ideal customers, so they could carve out market share.

    The Client

    Jevon Baby is a Singapore-based startup revolutionising the global breast pump market with their medical-grade, wearable (and super-silent) pump. They want parents to feel empowered and supported, and to offer them solutions that mean they can live their lives AND give their babies the best.

    The Challenge

    Jevon Baby faced challenges common to a lot of eCommerce startups:

    • Standing out in a saturated market where most competitors focused on technical features
    • Building immediate trust in a space where consumers want a LOT of reassurance (and will often go on recommendations)
    • Giving browsers enough information to make their decision, without overwhelming them with technical language
    • Putting genuine customer connection at the heart of their brand, rather than hard-sell and discounts
    • Creating content that would feel consistent across all customer touchpoints

    The Solution

    I worked with the JevonBaby team to develop a brand messaging strategy that met those challenges, and helped them connect with their ideal avatar from day one. The Guide I produced also gave them a framework for consistent communication across all channels as they launched and beyond. (And then I worked with their web development team to create website copy based on this strategy).

    Deep research into customer pain points and potential objections to purchase

    I spent time gathering information on what was really annoying and frustrating mums about the current breast pump solutions. And I landed on this image of a mother missing out on life as she sat attached to a hospital-grade, mains-powered pump that was plugged into the wall or hiding in the bathroom in between meetings because the wearable pump was too loud and conspicuous.

    This turned into (among other things) the tagline – “Life, without limitations”, positioning the JevonBaby pump as the answer to a real felt pain.

    Story-driven messaging that emphasises emotional benefits over technical features

    When you’re a challenger brand, you can’t rely on pages of 5-star Google Reviews or an army of UGC creators shouting about your product. So you have to do something different. In the case of JevonBaby, the difference was moving away from technical features and “innovative solutions”, and making their audience feel heard and understood.

    A lot of breast pump brands go all in on the authority vibe – they use technical medical language and a “you can trust us because we’re smart and more qualified that you” vibe. It’s a parental, professional brand voice that works well for them. But I wanted to do something different with JevonBaby. I wanted a modern vibe, and a friend at the bar brand voice, appealing to those parents who didn’t want to change their personalities just because they’d become parents. They wanted to be adventurous, to work, to go out to dinner, to travel. And they didn’t want to be held back by their breast pump.

    They’d look at JevonBaby and feel empowered. An emotional pull, rather than trying to overwhelm people with a list of technical features.

    You can check out their website here: Jevonbaby.com

    The Impact

    The Brand Messaging Guide and website copy we worked on meant Jevon Baby could:

    • Launch with a clear, distinctive voice in their market
    • Build trust by actually speaking to their audience’s worries and needs
    • Connect emotionally with their target audience
    • Make sure their content was saying the same thing across all channels
    • Set a strong foundation for sustainable growth – even into other product lines

    The founder’s verdict:

    “Peta really over-delivered! If you are looking for a professional brand strategist, please look for Peta.”

    Clement JevonBaby founder

    So What?

    The chances are, someone else is selling the same thing as you are. And they probably have a bigger ad budget.

    So, to build your business, you need more than a great product. You need to be able to show people why they should buy it from you. Why are you better? Why is your version of the product better for them? Why should they trust you?

    That’s what one of my Brand Messaging Guides does for you:

    • Gives you the information you need on your audience – what they’re looking for, and the language they’re using to talk about it – so that you can use that language throughout your brand communications and make them feel heard.
    • Helps you figure out what’s really unique and interesting about your brand, your product, and your story – so that you can really stand out n your marketplace
    • Gives you empathy-based, story-driven messaging that you can put EVERYWHERE – so that you can create those emotional connections that drive customer loyalty.
    • Makes sure that your team has clear guidelines for creating all your content – so that you can build trust through consistency.

    Are you ready to build a foundation for scalable, sustainable growth? Let’s talk about how clear brand messaging can transform your eCommerce business.

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  • How my Brand Voice Guide freed a founder from content micromanagement and saved him 10 Hours a Week

    The TDLR

    Evolution Engineers, a rapidly growing digital marketing agency, was struggling with consistent brand messaging across their expanding team. Founder James Lee found himself trapped in a constant feedback loop, correcting content instead of focusing on strategic growth. I developed a hybrid Brand Messaging and Tone of Voice Guide for the team, resulting in clearer communication, increased team alignment, and a stronger brand identity – freeing James up to focus on high-value tasks.

    The Client

    Evolution Engineers is a digital marketing agency founded in 2019 by James Lee. They offer consulting services, lead generation, and traditional digital marketing, catering to marketing directors and heads of marketing in various industries.

    The Challenge

    As the Evolution Engineers grew, they faced:

    • Inconsistent brand voice across team members
    • Lack of clear, objective resources for new hires
    • Difficulty articulating their unique value proposition without falling into industry clichés

    Most frustratingly, James found himself caught in a time-consuming feedback loop. He explained, “Whenever new people join, there’s this learning cycle where they’ll get feedback from me saying, ‘Oh, that doesn’t sound like us.’ In my mind, I think I know what Evolution Engineers sounds like, and sometimes we execute it quite well… but we’re definitely not consistent with it.”

    This constant need for correction was eating into James’s time, preventing him from focusing on strategic growth and high-value tasks.

    The Solution

    I crafted a hybrid Brand Messaging and Tone of Voice Guide, tailored to Evolution Engineers’ unique needs. My approach included:

    • Brand discovery questionnaire and interview
    • Analysing materials that best represented EE’s desired voice
    • Market, audience, and competitor research
    • Interviews with EE’s clients to gather vital Voice of Customer info
    • 60-minute voice exploration workshop with the team
    • Development of key messages
    • Creation of a Brand Voice Guide, including tone analysis, brand voice pillars, and channel-specific guidelines

    I focused on creating an easy-to-use resource full of examples so team members could quickly see how EE speaks in various formats.

    The Impact

    So, what difference did it actually make?

    • Clearer articulation of Evolution Engineers’ UVP
    • Consistent brand voice across all content and channels
    • Easier onboarding process for new hires
    • Improved ability to stand out in a saturated market
    • Significant reduction in time spent on content corrections (estimated at 10 hours per week saved)

    James was particularly relieved to have an objective resource for the team to reference. Freeing him from having to personally go through every piece of content that EE puts out.

    He said, “Now when I say ‘that’s what Evolution Engineers sounds like,’ that’s what I mean. It’s not just in my head anymore.”

    “Peta did a really good job of listening and hearing. She truly heard us, not just listened to us. We came out of the process feeling understood. Now, I can focus on growing the business instead of constantly correcting content.”

    So what?

    Is your growing team struggling to maintain a consistent brand voice? Imagine onboarding new hires who instantly ‘get’ your brand’s tone.

    Are you spending more time editing social posts, white papers, or articles than you would writing them yourself?

    What if you could have your own actionable guide that made it easy for every team member to sound like your brand – minimal edit rounds required?

    Book a free strategy call now and let’s talk about how a Brand Voice Guide could save you time and frustration!

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