eCommerce

  • How I helped an eCommerce brand find its voice – and built a brand that feels like home

    When two data-driven founders decided to move beyond Amazon, they knew a logo wasn’t enough. They needed a message they could stand behind – and a brand their customers could believe in.

    The Situation: A product with traction, but no clear identity

    Pulse of Home had a strong foundation. Over 75,000 customers. Great reviews. A growing team. But all of that lived on Amazon (so they couldn’t access vital customer data), with a placeholder brand that didn’t reflect what they were really building.

    They were ready to move to a direct-to-consumer model. But they knew they needed to do it with intention – not just a prettier shopfront, but a brand people could actually connect with. When they came to me, they were clear on what they didn’t want. No vague storytelling. No overly poetic fluff. They wanted a message grounded in truth, empathy, and a deeper understanding of their customers.

    The Goal: A brand that resonates – and scales

    The founders weren’t trying to be influencers or interior designers. They were pragmatic, operations-focused, and working behind the scenes to create a brilliant customer experience. They’d seen a gap in the market that coincided with their skills, and they’d built their business around that.

    But they knew that wasn’t enough. Their ideal customers – style-conscious renters, design lovers on a budget, people who wanted their home to feel like them – needed more to go on than shipping speed and price point. They wanted me to create a story around the brand.

    Our goal was to create a message that could do three things:

    • Reflect the values behind the business (without making them up)
    • Speak directly to the customer’s real-life challenges and aspirations
    • Provide a practical foundation for content, design and future campaigns

    The Process: Listening first, then writing

    A collage of pages from my brand messaging guide for Pulse of Home, including the "our brand voice" page, a title page, and the brand's logo.

    Usually when I’m building a brand story, I start with the founder/s. That’s where I listen to how they built the brand, tap into the emotion and story behind that. But, with Pulse of Home this wasn’t going to work. The emotion – the story – needed to come from somewhere else: their audience. So I went digging.

    Over five weeks, I worked through a combination of:

    • Discovery calls with the founders
    • Forum and review mining for voice of customer data
    • Interviews with five home and lifestyle influencers whose audiences matched their target market

    From this, I developed a full brand messaging guide, including:

    • Brand mission, values and positioning
    • A clear brand voice (optimistic, warm, and encouraging without being overly casual)
    • Two customer avatars drawn from real behaviours and motivations
    • Key messages mapped to different points in the sales cycle
    • Practical copy guidance for social, product pages and customer comms.

    The Outcome: A message the team could actually use

    By the end of the project, Pulse of Home had a clear brand message they could hand off to their web designer, social media manager and future collaborators – confident that everyone would be working from the same core narrative.

    The messaging now runs through their new homepage, product descriptions and social posts. And because it was built around the reality of their customers’ lives, it has made content creation easier, more focused, and more effective.

    They’ve seen a steady increase in visibility and sales since applying the messaging – but just as importantly, the brand now feels like something their team can grow with.

    They have stories they can tell, pictures they can paint, and emotions they can be sure will resonate with their audience.

    A testimonial graphic "I'll keep it short since making words sound pretty is not my best skill (hers is). She nailed it on the spot. 

She helped us build a cohesive brand identity, which will help us build our brand into one of the main brands in our niche. Having a cohesive brand is more important than ever, either for community building or having an actual moat in an all-commoditized market." Julian and Simon, Pulse of home Founders

    So what?

    If you’re a founder who’s used to thinking in numbers, customer service tickets and logistics dashboards, it’s not always easy to talk about brand.

    This project shows what’s possible when you pair strategic clarity with human insight. You can create messaging that feels like a natural extension of the business itself, while tapping into the exact emotions your audience are feeling. Meaning they actually want to buy from you!

    Is this you? Are you struggling to excavate a compelling story from your successful (but sterile) brand? You can find out more about my Brand Messaging Guides here.

    Then you should book a call – and I’ll show you how I can help.

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  • Building customer trust from day one – an eCommerce success story

    mother kissing her cute baby
    Photo by Polina Tankilevitch on Pexels.com

    The TLDR

    Jevon Baby, a startup launching a medical-grade, wearable breast pump, needed to stand out in a competitive market where trust is everything. Through strategic brand messaging and empathy-driven website copy, they launched with a clear voice that resonates with their ideal customers, so they could carve out market share.

    The Client

    Jevon Baby is a Singapore-based startup revolutionising the global breast pump market with their medical-grade, wearable (and super-silent) pump. They want parents to feel empowered and supported, and to offer them solutions that mean they can live their lives AND give their babies the best.

    The Challenge

    Jevon Baby faced challenges common to a lot of eCommerce startups:

    • Standing out in a saturated market where most competitors focused on technical features
    • Building immediate trust in a space where consumers want a LOT of reassurance (and will often go on recommendations)
    • Giving browsers enough information to make their decision, without overwhelming them with technical language
    • Putting genuine customer connection at the heart of their brand, rather than hard-sell and discounts
    • Creating content that would feel consistent across all customer touchpoints

    The Solution

    I worked with the JevonBaby team to develop a brand messaging strategy that met those challenges, and helped them connect with their ideal avatar from day one. The Guide I produced also gave them a framework for consistent communication across all channels as they launched and beyond. (And then I worked with their web development team to create website copy based on this strategy).

    Deep research into customer pain points and potential objections to purchase

    I spent time gathering information on what was really annoying and frustrating mums about the current breast pump solutions. And I landed on this image of a mother missing out on life as she sat attached to a hospital-grade, mains-powered pump that was plugged into the wall or hiding in the bathroom in between meetings because the wearable pump was too loud and conspicuous.

    This turned into (among other things) the tagline – “Life, without limitations”, positioning the JevonBaby pump as the answer to a real felt pain.

    Story-driven messaging that emphasises emotional benefits over technical features

    When you’re a challenger brand, you can’t rely on pages of 5-star Google Reviews or an army of UGC creators shouting about your product. So you have to do something different. In the case of JevonBaby, the difference was moving away from technical features and “innovative solutions”, and making their audience feel heard and understood.

    A lot of breast pump brands go all in on the authority vibe – they use technical medical language and a “you can trust us because we’re smart and more qualified that you” vibe. It’s a parental, professional brand voice that works well for them. But I wanted to do something different with JevonBaby. I wanted a modern vibe, and a friend at the bar brand voice, appealing to those parents who didn’t want to change their personalities just because they’d become parents. They wanted to be adventurous, to work, to go out to dinner, to travel. And they didn’t want to be held back by their breast pump.

    They’d look at JevonBaby and feel empowered. An emotional pull, rather than trying to overwhelm people with a list of technical features.

    You can check out their website here: Jevonbaby.com

    The Impact

    The Brand Messaging Guide and website copy we worked on meant Jevon Baby could:

    • Launch with a clear, distinctive voice in their market
    • Build trust by actually speaking to their audience’s worries and needs
    • Connect emotionally with their target audience
    • Make sure their content was saying the same thing across all channels
    • Set a strong foundation for sustainable growth – even into other product lines

    The founder’s verdict:

    “Peta really over-delivered! If you are looking for a professional brand strategist, please look for Peta.”

    Clement JevonBaby founder

    So What?

    The chances are, someone else is selling the same thing as you are. And they probably have a bigger ad budget.

    So, to build your business, you need more than a great product. You need to be able to show people why they should buy it from you. Why are you better? Why is your version of the product better for them? Why should they trust you?

    That’s what one of my Brand Messaging Guides does for you:

    • Gives you the information you need on your audience – what they’re looking for, and the language they’re using to talk about it – so that you can use that language throughout your brand communications and make them feel heard.
    • Helps you figure out what’s really unique and interesting about your brand, your product, and your story – so that you can really stand out n your marketplace
    • Gives you empathy-based, story-driven messaging that you can put EVERYWHERE – so that you can create those emotional connections that drive customer loyalty.
    • Makes sure that your team has clear guidelines for creating all your content – so that you can build trust through consistency.

    Are you ready to build a foundation for scalable, sustainable growth? Let’s talk about how clear brand messaging can transform your eCommerce business.

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